- From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 1 Aug 2003 01:35:03 -0700
- To: www-dom@w3.org
Hello, This is a comment for your DOM Level 3 Core Last Call Working Draft [1]. Sorry it is over an hour late. White space is two words (see all prose and productions in XML 1.0 except one typo in 1998 and the Infoset since WD-xml-infoset-20010202). I don't know why it wound up being one word in [element content whitespace]. Do you? isWhitespaceInElementContent [2] could (should?) be isWhiteSpaceInElementContent and whitespace-in-element-content [3] could be white-space-in-element-content. If Last Call is too late to change those, perhaps at least the prose could match XML and the Infoset to say "white space" (rather than "whitespaces"). Also I happened to see: s/web/Web/ s/"Universal Resource Identifiers"/"Uniform Resource Identifiers"/ s/[XML Information set]/[XML Information Set]/ In the lists of defined constants, some dd's end in periods when they are sentences but some don't. They could all match. In Appendix E, does "part of the Level 2 DOM specification" mean Level 3 now? ArborText (contents page) became Arbortext (section 1). I don't know what year that happened but maybe the Mike Champion affiliation can match. [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-DOM-Level-3-Core-20030609/ [2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-DOM-Level-3-Core-20030609/core.html#Text3-isWhitespaceInElementContent [3] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-DOM-Level-3-Core-20030609/core.html#parameter-whitespace-in-element-content -- Susan Lesch http://www.w3.org/People/Lesch/ mailto:lesch@w3.org tel:+1.858.483.4819 World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) http://www.w3.org/
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