- From: <noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com>
- Date: Mon, 26 Aug 2002 16:26:00 -0400
- To: "Martin Gudgin" <mgudgin@microsoft.com>
- Cc: "Nilo Mitra" <EUSNILM@am1.ericsson.se>, "Henrik Frystyk Nielsen" <henrikn@microsoft.com>, "Marc Hadley" <marc.hadley@sun.com>, "Jean-Jacques Moreau" <moreau@crf.canon.fr>, "W3C Public Archive" <www-archive@w3.org>
I was assigned to doublecheck the text of the spec regarding issue 227 (that's the one questioning whether mandatory use of features by bindings is OK). I have read the specs and verified that they are all set per the resolution, no changes needed. Edtodo has been updated to show issue closed. While doing that reading, I noticed typos and minor questionable wording in one area of part 1, and another in part 2. Both changes have been made and checked in as follows: Part 1 section 4.2: <original> In cases where multiple features are supported by a binding specification the specifications for those features MUST provide any information necessary for their successful use in combination. Similarly if a certain feature cannot be used if another feature is present this MUST be specified. ; this binding framework does not provide any explicit mechanism for ensuring such compatibility of multiple features. </original> note ";" following the period. I also felt the wording to be a bit lumpy. <revised> In cases where multiple features are supported by a binding specification, the specifications for those features MUST provide any information necessary for their successful use in combination. Similarly, any dependencies of one feature on another (I.e. if successful use of one feature depends on use or non-use of another) MUST be specified. This binding framework does not provide any explicit mechanism for controlling the use of such interdependent features. </revised> Part 2 In 5.1.1 Properties, added comma after "Where appropriate". Without the comma the sentence parses ambiguously. As I say, both of these are checked into the xml versions. Any problem, let me know and we can discuss. Thanks. ------------------------------------------------------------------ Noah Mendelsohn Voice: 1-617-693-4036 IBM Corporation Fax: 1-617-693-8676 One Rogers Street Cambridge, MA 02142 ------------------------------------------------------------------
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