- From: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 21 Jun 2021 12:05:36 +0200
- To: jade.matoscarew@open.ac.uk
- Cc: "wai-eo-editors@w3.org" <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Hi Jade, Many thanks for your thorough review and thoughtful comments! Please find some responses inline: On 04/06/2021 10:42, Jade Matos Carew via WBS Mailer wrote: >> --------------------------------- >> Draft script for Success Criterion 2.1.2 "No Keyboard Trap" >> >> ---- >> Draft script for Success Criterion 2.1.2 "No Keyboard Trap" >> For each of your comments, please clearly indicate: >> * Location: eg. "SC 1.2.2 - Scene 2" >> * Priority: eg. "[e]" for editorial or "[i]" for important >> * Current wording: >> * Suggested revision: >> * Rationale: >> >> > > * [x] I am comfortable with this script as it currently is (no changes > suggested) > * [ ] Please consider my comments raised in GitHub or in the comments > field below (for editors' discretion) > * [ ] I abstain from commenting and accept the decisions of the Working > Group > Comments: > Suggest different text for scene 5, somehing like 'Brami can now use his > mouth stick comfortably and effectively when using this app.' Changed to "Brami can now use his mouth stick to type on his keyboard". Regards, Shadi -- Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ Accessibility Strategy and Technology Specialist Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)
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