Re: [wbs] response to 'WCAG Video Scripts - Thorough Review 2'

Hi Laura,

Many thanks for your thorough review and thoughtful comments! Please 
find some responses inline:


On 28/05/2021 16:12, Laura Keen via WBS Mailer wrote:
>> ---------------------------------
>> Draft script for Success Criterion 2.1.1 "Keyboard"
>>
>> ----
>> Draft script for Success Criterion 2.1.1 "Keyboard"
>> For each of your comments, please clearly indicate:
>>   * Location: eg. "SC 1.2.2 - Scene 2"
>>     * Priority: eg. "[e]" for editorial  or "[i]" for important
>>     * Current wording:
>>     * Suggested revision:
>>     * Rationale:
>>
>>
> 
>   * [ ] I am comfortable with this script as it currently is (no changes
> suggested)
>   * [x] Please consider my comments raised in GitHub or in the comments
> field below (for editors' discretion)
>   * [ ] I abstain from commenting and accept the decisions of the Working
> Group
> Comments:
> [i] Scene 1 Visual should be: We 'see' the screen and the email application
> opening and the message being started as she speaks the commands.

Fixed, thanks.

The sub-group opened issue #64 on this script and welcomes your input:
  - https://github.com/w3c/wai-wcag-videos/issues/64


>> ---------------------------------
>> Draft script for Success Criterion 2.1.3 "Keyboard (No Exception)"
>>
>> ----
>> Draft script for Success Criterion 2.1.3 "Keyboard (No Exception)"
>> For each of your comments, please clearly indicate:
>>   * Location: eg. "SC 1.2.2 - Scene 2"
>>     * Priority: eg. "[e]" for editorial  or "[i]" for important
>>     * Current wording:
>>     * Suggested revision:
>>     * Rationale:
>>
>>
> 
>   * [ ] I am comfortable with this script as it currently is (no changes
> suggested)
>   * [x] Please consider my comments raised in GitHub or in the comments
> field below (for editors' discretion)
>   * [ ] I abstain from commenting and accept the decisions of the Working
> Group
> Comments:
> [i] Scene 1 Visual should be: We 'see' the screen with a drawing
> application and the “draw line” function being started as she speaks
> the commands.

Fixed, thanks.

The sub-group opened issue #66 on this script and welcomes your input:
  - https://github.com/w3c/wai-wcag-videos/issues/66


>> ---------------------------------
>> Draft script for Success Criterion 2.1.4 "Character Key Shortcuts"
>>
>> ----
>> Draft script for Success Criterion 2.1.4 "Character Key Shortcuts"
>> For each of your comments, please clearly indicate:
>>   * Location: eg. "SC 1.2.2 - Scene 2"
>>     * Priority: eg. "[e]" for editorial  or "[i]" for important
>>     * Current wording:
>>     * Suggested revision:
>>     * Rationale:
>>
>>
> 
>   * [ ] I am comfortable with this script as it currently is (no changes
> suggested)
>   * [x] Please consider my comments raised in GitHub or in the comments
> field below (for editors' discretion)
>   * [ ] I abstain from commenting and accept the decisions of the Working
> Group
> Comments:
> [i] Scene 4 audio should be: For example, if 'he' is spelling a word with
> the letter “P” or saying something that sounds similar to it. [We hear
> Alex saying “P-O-box”]
> [i] Scene 5 visual should be: We see configuration 'settings' not
> seetings...

This script has been put on hold for now due to conflicting suggestions.


>> ---------------------------------
>> Draft script for Success Criterion 2.3.1 "Three Flashes or Below
>> Threshold"
>>
>> ----
>> Draft script for Success Criterion 2.3.1 "Three Flashes or Below
>> Threshold"
>> For each of your comments, please clearly indicate:
>>   * Location: eg. "SC 1.2.2 - Scene 2"
>>     * Priority: eg. "[e]" for editorial  or "[i]" for important
>>     * Current wording:
>>     * Suggested revision:
>>     * Rationale:
>>
>>
> 
>   * [ ] I am comfortable with this script as it currently is (no changes
> suggested)
>   * [x] Please consider my comments raised in GitHub or in the comments
> field below (for editors' discretion)
>   * [ ] I abstain from commenting and accept the decisions of the Working
> Group
> Comments:
> [i] scene 3 visual should be: We see 'Manti' not Manit ...

Fixed, thanks.

The sub-group opened issue #67 on this script and welcomes your input:
  - https://github.com/w3c/wai-wcag-videos/issues/67


Regards,
   Shadi

-- 
Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/
Accessibility Strategy and Technology Specialist
Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)

Received on Monday, 21 June 2021 10:07:57 UTC