Re: Eval video descriptive transcripts comments

Thanks Shawn,

I will try to update them over the weekend.

Regards,
Helen

On Fri, 21 Feb 2020 at 18:03, Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> wrote:

> Hi Helen,
>
> Thanks for whipping up the transcripts to fast! I really appreciate your
> taking this on.
>
> A couple of comments for now:
> * Delete "[narrator speaks]" from the "Visual" section (in the other
> transcript, "Shadi speaking" was actually a description of the visual. ;-)
> * "Logos of W3C and WAI." -> W3C and Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
> logos"
> * I *think* you want to describe the text visuals, even if they repeat the
> audio, e.g., first Visual: "Evaluating Web Accessibility: Resources
> Overview"
> * Combine content from multiple cells into one cell as appropriate. For
> example, I think put this in one cell:
> "To help you better understand how different users experience your website
> and applications, WAI provides guidance in "Involving Users in Web Projects
> for Better, Easier Accessibility" and "Involving Users in Evaluating Web
> Accessibility".
>
> In general, imagine that you are describing the visuals to someone who is
> blind and curious about them. What do they want to know? What is relevant
> related to the content? In some places, I think little description is
> warranted. In others, more. Example of maybe more: instead of "Round icons
> representing different types of disabilities arrange themselves in a
> semicircle above the computer.", maybe: "Icons around a computer: hand,
> eye, brain, ear, and mouth with sound waves."
>
> I think we might want a short sentence at the beginning briefly describing
> the style -- e.g., something along the lines of: "The visuals are simple
> animation with people represented as icon figures."
>
> Hopefully EOWG folks will have some other input. :-)
>
> Best,
> ~Shawn
>
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