Re: Eval video descriptive transcripts comments

Hi Shawn,

I have added a note before all of the transcripts, and rather than
repeating the audio words I added "The spoken words are shown." ! updated
everything as you indicated, and made a start on video 5.  There are some
bits I may need to amend again as not had any other feedback, and might
still be a bit too simplistic/need the final videos to double check the
visuals used.

Regards,
Helen

On Fri, Feb 21, 2020 at 6:32 PM Helen Burge <helen.burge@deque.com> wrote:

> Thanks Shawn,
>
> I will try to update them over the weekend.
>
> Regards,
> Helen
>
> On Fri, 21 Feb 2020 at 18:03, Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> wrote:
>
>> Hi Helen,
>>
>> Thanks for whipping up the transcripts to fast! I really appreciate your
>> taking this on.
>>
>> A couple of comments for now:
>> * Delete "[narrator speaks]" from the "Visual" section (in the other
>> transcript, "Shadi speaking" was actually a description of the visual. ;-)
>> * "Logos of W3C and WAI." -> W3C and Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
>> logos"
>> * I *think* you want to describe the text visuals, even if they repeat
>> the audio, e.g., first Visual: "Evaluating Web Accessibility: Resources
>> Overview"
>> * Combine content from multiple cells into one cell as appropriate. For
>> example, I think put this in one cell:
>> "To help you better understand how different users experience your
>> website and applications, WAI provides guidance in "Involving Users in Web
>> Projects for Better, Easier Accessibility" and "Involving Users in
>> Evaluating Web Accessibility".
>>
>> In general, imagine that you are describing the visuals to someone who is
>> blind and curious about them. What do they want to know? What is relevant
>> related to the content? In some places, I think little description is
>> warranted. In others, more. Example of maybe more: instead of "Round icons
>> representing different types of disabilities arrange themselves in a
>> semicircle above the computer.", maybe: "Icons around a computer: hand,
>> eye, brain, ear, and mouth with sound waves."
>>
>> I think we might want a short sentence at the beginning briefly
>> describing the style -- e.g., something along the lines of: "The visuals
>> are simple animation with people represented as icon figures."
>>
>> Hopefully EOWG folks will have some other input. :-)
>>
>> Best,
>> ~Shawn
>>
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