- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 21 Feb 2020 12:04:22 -0600
- To: Helen Burge <helen.burge@deque.com>
- Cc: wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Hi Helen, Thanks for whipping up the transcripts to fast! I really appreciate your taking this on. A couple of comments for now: * Delete "[narrator speaks]" from the "Visual" section (in the other transcript, "Shadi speaking" was actually a description of the visual. ;-) * "Logos of W3C and WAI." -> W3C and Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) logos" * I *think* you want to describe the text visuals, even if they repeat the audio, e.g., first Visual: "Evaluating Web Accessibility: Resources Overview" * Combine content from multiple cells into one cell as appropriate. For example, I think put this in one cell: "To help you better understand how different users experience your website and applications, WAI provides guidance in "Involving Users in Web Projects for Better, Easier Accessibility" and "Involving Users in Evaluating Web Accessibility". In general, imagine that you are describing the visuals to someone who is blind and curious about them. What do they want to know? What is relevant related to the content? In some places, I think little description is warranted. In others, more. Example of maybe more: instead of "Round icons representing different types of disabilities arrange themselves in a semicircle above the computer.", maybe: "Icons around a computer: hand, eye, brain, ear, and mouth with sound waves." I think we might want a short sentence at the beginning briefly describing the style -- e.g., something along the lines of: "The visuals are simple animation with people represented as icon figures." Hopefully EOWG folks will have some other input. :-) Best, ~Shawn
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