Re: [wbs] response to 'Review 2 of Evaluation Videos'

Hello Shadi,

Reading the script makes it clearer.

I did not have really understood the "expertise in" before the bulletted 
list.

In the intonation, the speaker says: you need expertise", then she makes 
a pause, and then says: "in accessibility standards".


The script text displays: you need expertise in:

[bullet]: accessibility standards...

the script is, for the last bullet: "and how people with disabilities 
use the Web."

The speaker says: and in how people with disabilities use the Web".

that's why I thought there was a word missing because of the intonation 
I thought she was talking about the resource "how peopel with 
disabilities use the web".

So to make it clearer, change the intonation, but I'm sure it will be 
done in the end.

Or add: "To do effective conformance evaluation, "you need expertise in 
the following topics" or something similar.

Or do not say "and in how people with disabilities use the Web".

I am not sure my explanations are clear as they are written, not 
pronounced with intonation.

Best

Sylvie

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Le 06/12/2019 à 11:46, Shadi Abou-Zahra a écrit :
> Hi Sylvie,
>
> Many thanks for your quick response! Comments inline below:
>
>
> On 06/12/2019 11:33, Sylvie Duchateau via WBS Mailer wrote:
>>> Video 4: Comprehensive Evaluation (2nd Draft)
>>>
> [SNIP]
>>>
>>>
>> Comments:
>> I cannot find the script of the video for now, but I noticed one
>> incoherence in the spoken text.
>
> Here is the script:
>  - 
> https://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Video-Based_Resources/Evaluation_Introduction#Video_4:_Comprehensive_Evaluation_.28.7E2_minutes.29
>
>
>> I understand the beginning, that explains what a conformance review is,
>> then what you need to do effective comprehensive evaluation review :
>> "- expertise in accessibility standards,
>
> Not really. It says "To do effective conformance evaluation, you need 
> expertise in:" -- maybe bad voice-over intonation?
>
>
>> - accessible web design and develompent,
>> - assistive technologies
>> and in how people with disabilities use the web".
>> This does not make sense for me. May be how people with disabilities use
>> the can help you for that.
>> Is somehting missing?
>
> No. To do effective conformance evaluation, you need expertise in ... 
> how people with disabilities use the Web. Wonder where the confusion 
> occurred and how to improve it.
>
>
>>> Video 5: Involving Users (2nd Draft)
>>>
>>>
> [SNIP]
>>>
>>>
>> Comments:
>> It was difficult to concentrate on this video as I only rely on 
>> sound, not
>> visual, as the music is bit too loud in comparison with the 
>> narration. But
>> I know that this will be changed in the next version. So it is not a 
>> cruial
>> comment.
>
> Sorry about that. Yes, the music and volume corrections are not done.
>
>
> Many thanks,
>   Shadi
>