Re: Selecting evaluation tools - Final (?) version

Thanks Shadi,

Regarding #1, I'll adjust that. We need a heading, but your point does make
sense.

Regarding #3, it's in the EO style guide

Regarding #4, I'll move it up. As I wasn't able to simply merge your pull
request, I had to go through the file manually and obviously missed it.

Regarding #2, I'm honestly not seeing it, and I'm not sure how it is the
same underlying issue. But I'll have a look.

I'll update #1, and #4 momentarily.

Nic

On Tue, Nov 14, 2017 at 9:11 AM, Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org> wrote:

> Hi Nic,
>
> I only had time to do a quick skim, but many thanks for addressing many of
> my concerns! Just a few things that caught my attention, though:
>
> - I still don't really like the heading "Features You Can Use as a
> Filter". It just does not make sense to me on this page, if I'm not aware
> of the tools list. It takes quite some mind work (eg read the *prior*
> paragraph) to understand the context.
>
> - I find the tone and approach of the descriptions rather inconsistent and
> confusing. Often you are describing the functionality of the tools list
> rather than the actual tool feature itself.
>
> - Not sure about use of "e.g." and "etc.". I don't like that style
> (personal opinion), but don't know if it is covered in the EO guide.
>
> - "Accessibility Information" is actually a feature that you can sort by.
> I had moved it up. Not sure if you disagree or just missed it.
>
>
> Are these comments helpful for you, or do you prefer that I raise them as
> issues or put them in another pull request?
>
> Best,
>   Shadi
>
>
>
> On 13/11/2017 21:05, Nic Steenhout wrote:
>
>> Hello Shadi,
>>
>> Laura and I have, we think, finalized and incorporated the changes you
>> suggested to the Selecting evaluation tools page.
>>
>> https://github.com/w3c/wai-selecting-eval-tools/blob/master/index.md
>>
>> I had to rewrite the page manually as I was not able to merge only parts
>> of your pull request.
>>
>> We both like how the page is looking at the moment.
>>
>> Could you have a look and if things are good on your front, we'll be able
>> to initiate a request for review from the whole group this Friday!
>>
>> Thank you
>>
>> Nic
>>
>
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> Accessibility Strategy and Technology Specialist
> Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
> World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)
>