- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 17 Sep 2015 15:21:24 -0500
- To: Kevin White <kevin@w3.org>
- Cc: wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
On 9/17/2015 3:13 PM, Kevin White wrote:
>
>> On 17 Sep 2015, at 21:07, Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> wrote:
>>
>> better. how about:
>> "
>> Tips are grouped by activity (Designing, Writing, Developing, etc.) and information relevant to your work might be in more than one Tips pages.
>> "
>> or
>> "
>> Tips are grouped by activity (Designing, Writing, Developing, ...) and information relevant to your work might be in more than one Tips page.
>> “
>
> Not sure about including the labels as ‘etc’ and ‘…’ suggest more than we have.
>
> ‘Tips pages’ -> ‘section’?
The aren't sections. They are separate pages.
>
> I find ‘Tips pages’ a little bit clunky.
>
>> ("might" is more informal than "may" - and I like it better ;-)
>
> Ah, but ‘might’ has less certainty than ‘may’… learned that from Anna Belle this afternoon ;)
>
> I am happy with either though.
>
> Kevin
>
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