- From: Kevin White <kevin@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 17 Sep 2015 21:13:13 +0100
- To: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Cc: wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
> On 17 Sep 2015, at 21:07, Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> wrote:
>
> better. how about:
> "
> Tips are grouped by activity (Designing, Writing, Developing, etc.) and information relevant to your work might be in more than one Tips pages.
> "
> or
> "
> Tips are grouped by activity (Designing, Writing, Developing, ...) and information relevant to your work might be in more than one Tips page.
> “
Not sure about including the labels as ‘etc’ and ‘…’ suggest more than we have.
‘Tips pages’ -> ‘section’?
I find ‘Tips pages’ a little bit clunky.
> ("might" is more informal than "may" - and I like it better ;-)
Ah, but ‘might’ has less certainty than ‘may’… learned that from Anna Belle this afternoon ;)
I am happy with either though.
Kevin
Received on Thursday, 17 September 2015 20:13:24 UTC