- From: Andrew Arch <andrew@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 08 Jun 2009 13:58:00 +0100
- To: achuter@technosite.es
- CC: "wai-eo-editors@w3.org" <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Thanks Alan, All good suggestions. Andrew Alan Chuter wrote: > I noticed a few small things in the Introduction to this document [1]. > > Second paragraph of introduction "While accessibility focuses on people > with disabilities, accessibility also benefits..." repeats > "accessibility." Could be "While accessibility focuses on people with > disabilities, it also benefits..." > > Third paragraph, "invest the initial costs" could be "make the initial > investment." > > The last sentence "a" rather than "the" in "...an analysis of the > project's value..." > > > > [1] http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/age/Overview.html > > > Alan Chuter, > Consultor > Departamento de Accesibilidad y Experiencia de Usuario > Technosite - Grupo Fundosa > Fundación ONCE > Tel: 91 121 03 30 > E-mail: achuter@technosite.es > www.technosite.es > > >
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