- From: Harvey Bingham <hbingham@acm.org>
- Date: Fri, 02 Apr 2004 08:58:14 -0500
- To: "WAI Editors" <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
- Cc: "Shawn Lawton Henry" <shawn@w3.org>
Your fingers may have been flying out of sync with your brain!
Second para, first sentence:
organizations (sp)
by full a by a full
Introduction:
Third sentence: change "to commitment" to "for committing"
Third paragraph: "guideance" "guidance"
Technical Factors ..."reduce" use gerunds to get parallel styles:
"reducing" (2), ...enabling, ... preparing ..
Financial Factors clean up text. "including direct cost savings,
reduced initial costs and ongoing maintenance costs,"
Legal Factors ... rather than end with "for Web Accessibility" "mandating
Web Accessibility"
Regards/Harvey
Received on Friday, 2 April 2004 08:59:03 UTC