- From: Rafael Romero <Rafael.Romero@uv.es>
- Date: Tue, 10 Nov 1998 23:27:43 +0100
- To: w3c-wai-ua@w3.org
Hello. Sorry for the late reply (on last day). I did not belong to User-Agent working group, but I follow the invitation sent by Judy to WAI-IG for reviewing the document. These are my humble comments: >1. Is the document understandable and clear? I think so, although it is quite dense. It is not addressed to the general public but to user agent manufacturers who should be familiar with all terms and the concise style. >2. Does the format/structure of the document work well? Mostly yes. I was going to suggest to indent <class="tocline3"> more than <class="tocline2">, because in my Explorer 4 the table of contents is difficult to read as it comes out in undifferenced elements, vertically aligned to the left, but, Oops, I realised it renders nicely in Opera 2.12. So I suppose is is finely defined. I missed a note about the red <SPAN CLASS="editor"> comments. I suppose they are to disappear in the final version. Maybe points 3. 4. 5. 6. (the user-agent must...) of Guidelines should be considered as sub-headings of a more general point <3. Detailed guidelines> >3. Are the priorities appropriate as indicated? Can't comment. >4. Do people have recommended additions for the techniques document? Just a brief punctualisation. 5.4 and 5.5: Why specifically KEYBOARD navigation? I agree of course on the capital importance of this, but in the spirit of <3.6 device-independent manner...> maybe you should reword and say just "navigation", and later stressed that it is "including keyboard navigation". Consider the case of a hands-free voice-controlled browser. >5. Is anything missing from the guidelines? Can't comment. >6. Does the document comprehensively address cross-disability issues in >user agent accessibility, e.g., accessibility issues for cognitive >disabilities, hearing disabilities, physical disabilities, and visual >disabilities? Can't comment. Of course, congratulations on the overall work. Best regards, Rafael Romero. ------------------------------------------- mailto:Rafael.Romero@uv.es Unidad de Investigación ACCESO Universitat de Valencia (Spain) C/ Artes Gráficas 13, 46010 Valencia Tel: +34-963 864 135 Fax: +34-963 864 758 http://acceso.uv.es/ -------------------------------------------
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