Editorial issues (was RE: CFC Add Accessible authentication into Editors Draft)

Please note the editorial issues below with the text proposed in the CfC. This is not my response to the CfC itself.

From: Joshue O Connor [mailto:josh@interaccess.ie]
Sent: Tuesday, June 20, 2017 2:50 PM

Essential steps of an authentication process, which rely upon recalling or transcribing information, have one of the following:

  *       alternative essential steps, which do not rely upon recalling and transcribing information; or
[Jason] Shouldn’t the “and” be an “or” in this item (i.e., “recalling or transcribing”)?

  *       an authentication-credentials reset process, which does not rely upon recalling and transcribing information
[Jason] The same issue occurs in this alternative too.



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