Re: 7 November 2000 WCAG 2.0 draft available

Wendy,

	Checked out the guidelines (well, the first few anyway), and your
experiment in using graphics was well done. It is, honesty, the first time
I have seen a long description link in use. 

	The three examples listed are good, but they, too, beg to be illustrated. 

	Let me nitpick on the first example.

>Example 1. a short label: A right arrow icon is used to link to the next
slide in a slideshow. The text equivalent is the title of the next slide. 

The text equivalent for the arrow should be the word "next", not the title
of the next slide, unless the title is also presented in the visual
version. Technically, to be most correct, and most useful, the arrow should
have the word "next" embedded in it as well as associated in the text
equivalent.

>Example 2. a short label and a longer explanation: A bar chart compares
how many widgets were sold in June, July, and August. The short label says,
"Numbers of widgets sold in June, July, and August." The longer explanation
provides the data presented in the chart. 

This should be provided with an example of such a bar chart and the short
label (alt text?) and longer explanation (D-Link?).  

>Example 3. a short label and a longer explanation: An animation shows how
to tie a knot. The short label says, "How to tie a figure 8." The longer
explanation describes the hand movements needed to tie the knot. 

Again, this begs to be illustrated. You may need to change the example if
an animation on tying a knot doesn't exist. The flash animation on the
www.ikea.com site to put together a bookcase could be used, if a shorter
example can't be found. 

Wendy, you've made an excellent start!

					Anne

	
Anne L. Pemberton
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Received on Tuesday, 7 November 2000 07:22:36 UTC