- From: Eric Eggert <ee@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 30 Oct 2019 10:16:23 +0100
- To: w3c-wai-eo@w3.org, "Shadi Abou-Zahra" <shadi@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <A92518C9-D71C-4344-AB00-440E5A1E7711@w3.org>
Really quick feedback on it: Overall I really like it. I think there could be more time between some aspects of the video, just lingering for half a second so it can sink in. This goes especially after WAI resource titles are announced. The animation is really, really good! **00:27 – WAI Logo** Should be added as a vector, it is very pixelated. **00:36 – “Easy Checks – A First Review of Web Accessibility”** Use an EN-Dash instead of a hyphen for the subtitle. **01:13 – “Website Accessibility Conformance Methodology – WCAG-EM”** Should also use an EN Dash instead of an hyphen between Evaluation Methodology and WCAG-EM Alternatively put WCAG-EM in a new bubble underneath the full name once it is said on screen. “Doubble-U-See-Ai-Gee-Ee-Em” for short does not sound so short when it is spelled out this way :-) **01:21 – Progress bar** I love taking the progress bar from the tool. It might be worth investigating if the blue arrow (the where are you now marker) could go to the right during the speech (instead of just the bar appearing). But not a blocker. **01:47 – Checks** Instead of “Checks”, maybe the sheet should say “Issues”. **End Card** I don’t like the different colors and spacing and the whole end card looks a little bit messy. It also uses the brown color that we do not use in the new design anymore. The brand colors can be found here: https://wai-website-theme.netlify.com/components/colors/ I would also prefer left-aligned text. 👋 Eric -- Eric Eggert Web Accessibility Specialist Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) at World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)
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