Re: EOWG - Eval Video draft for review this week

Reading the minutes, I found the following two issues:

> Less motion while narration is going (esp sequence about iteration 
> seconds 9-12)

I personally found the motion helpful so I would not read something else 
on my computer. My mind can wander off really easily.

> De-emphasize music (and maybe consider not having it)

I would not want a music-less video as that would sound very sterile (we 
humans are always never surrounded by pure silence). The music could be 
more subtle.



(Thanks Sharron for the excellent minutes summary.)

đź‘‹ Eric

On 30 Oct 2019, at 10:16, Eric Eggert wrote:

> Really quick feedback on it:
>
> Overall I really like it. I think there could be more time between 
> some aspects of the video, just lingering for half a second so it can 
> sink in. This goes especially after WAI resource titles are announced. 
> The animation is really, really good!
>
> **00:27 – WAI Logo**
>
> Should be added as a vector, it is very pixelated.
>
>
> **00:36 – “Easy Checks – A First Review of Web 
> Accessibility”**
>
> Use an EN-Dash instead of a hyphen for the subtitle.
>
> **01:13 – “Website Accessibility Conformance Methodology – 
> WCAG-EM”**
>
> Should also use an EN Dash instead of an hyphen between Evaluation 
> Methodology and WCAG-EM Alternatively put WCAG-EM in a new bubble 
> underneath the full name once it is said on screen.
>
> “Doubble-U-See-Ai-Gee-Ee-Em” for short does not sound so short 
> when it is spelled out this way :-)
>
> **01:21 – Progress bar**
>
> I love taking the progress bar from the tool. It might be worth 
> investigating if the blue arrow (the where are you now marker) could 
> go to the right during the speech (instead of just the bar appearing). 
> But not a blocker.
>
> **01:47 – Checks**
>
> Instead of “Checks”, maybe the sheet should say “Issues”.
>
> **End Card**
>
> I don’t like the different colors and spacing and the whole end card 
> looks a little bit messy. It also uses the brown color that we do not 
> use in the new design anymore. The brand colors can be found here: 
> https://wai-website-theme.netlify.com/components/colors/
>
> I would also prefer left-aligned text.
>
> đź‘‹ Eric
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>
> Eric Eggert
> Web Accessibility Specialist
> Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) at World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)





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Eric Eggert
Web Accessibility Specialist
Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) at World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)

Received on Wednesday, 30 October 2019 12:49:48 UTC