Re: Review Tutorials Cover Page

Hi Kevin,


On 2 Jul 2014, at 10:55, Kevin White wrote:

> Second para, I wonder if the following is slightly better (aka 
> shorter… albeit not much! ;)):
>
> They provide valuable resources for a variety of role, including:

I wonder if using “role” instead of “roles” is really 
grammatically correct. At least for me roles sounds better. I’d like 
to know what opinion other native speakers have.

> "Images: In this tutorial, you can learn how to make images 
> accessible, including decorative, linked, and grouped images.”
>
> to
>
> "Images:  Learn how to communicate images in an accessible way, 
> including decorative, linked, and grouped images.”

Changed to: “Learn how to use images in an accessible way, including 
decorative, linked, and grouped images.” (I’d stumble over 
“communicate images” and I think use is sufficient.)

> “Additional tutorials… reviewed”
>
> to
>
> [header] Coming soon
>
> We are working on tutorials for the following areas. They will be 
> added once they have been completed and thoroughly reviewed.
>
> • Forms: ….
> • Sliders and carousels: ….
> • Tell us what you would like to see

I'm not really sure if we should promote future work in such a prominent 
way. Also asking for more topics seems to be not a good idea, as long as 
we don't know when we can work on new tutorials. I will check back with 
Shadi this week.

Best, Eric

>
>
> Thanks
>
> Kevin
>
>
> On 2 Jul 2014, at 09:18, Eric Eggert <ee@w3.org> wrote:
>
>> Hi EO Working Group,
>>
>> please take a look at the tutorial cover page that was just updated:
>> http://w3c.github.io/wai-tutorials/
>>
>> Feedback is welcome via email or in the meeting on Friday.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Eric
>>
>>
>>
>> --
>>
>> Eric Eggert, Web Accessibility Specialist
>> WAI-ACT Project
>>
>> I’m yatil on IRC.
>>




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Eric Eggert, Web Accessibility Specialist
WAI-ACT Project

I’m yatil on IRC.

Received on Saturday, 19 July 2014 09:19:52 UTC