Hi Eric, Looks great! I had one minor thing that then ballooned into a couple of bigger things. Feel free to add these into the mix or ignore as appropriate :) Some minor things: First para: "… and improves the user experience for all audiences." to "… and improve the user experience for all audiences." Second para, I wonder if the following is slightly better (aka shorter… albeit not much! ;)): They provide valuable resources for a variety of role, including: ‘All Tutorials’ seems a bit passive to me… not sure what I would use instead … just jars a little I guess. "Images: In this tutorial, you can learn how to make images accessible, including decorative, linked, and grouped images.” to "Images: Learn how to communicate images in an accessible way, including decorative, linked, and grouped images.” “Additional tutorials… reviewed” to [header] Coming soon We are working on tutorials for the following areas. They will be added once they have been completed and thoroughly reviewed. • Forms: …. • Sliders and carousels: …. • Tell us what you would like to see Thanks Kevin On 2 Jul 2014, at 09:18, Eric Eggert <ee@w3.org> wrote: > Hi EO Working Group, > > please take a look at the tutorial cover page that was just updated: > http://w3c.github.io/wai-tutorials/ > > Feedback is welcome via email or in the meeting on Friday. > > Thanks, > Eric > > > > -- > > Eric Eggert, Web Accessibility Specialist > WAI-ACT Project > > I’m yatil on IRC. >Received on Wednesday, 2 July 2014 08:56:32 UTC
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