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Re: Review Tutorials Cover Page

From: Kevin White <kevin@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 2 Jul 2014 09:55:57 +0100
Cc: "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Message-Id: <7C149D6B-9C20-405F-A975-E00A4BDA205D@w3.org>
To: Eric Eggert <ee@w3.org>
Hi Eric,

Looks great!

I had one minor thing that then ballooned into a couple of bigger things. Feel free to add these into the mix or ignore as appropriate :)

Some minor things:

First para:
"… and improves the user experience for all audiences."


"… and improve the user experience for all audiences."

Second para, I wonder if the following is slightly better (aka shorter… albeit not much! ;)):

They provide valuable resources for a variety of role, including:

‘All Tutorials’ seems a bit passive to me… not sure what I would use instead … just jars a little I guess.

"Images: In this tutorial, you can learn how to make images accessible, including decorative, linked, and grouped images.”


"Images:  Learn how to communicate images in an accessible way, including decorative, linked, and grouped images.”

“Additional tutorials… reviewed”


[header] Coming soon

We are working on tutorials for the following areas. They will be added once they have been completed and thoroughly reviewed.

• Forms: ….
• Sliders and carousels: ….
• Tell us what you would like to see



On 2 Jul 2014, at 09:18, Eric Eggert <ee@w3.org> wrote:

> Hi EO Working Group,
> please take a look at the tutorial cover page that was just updated:
> http://w3c.github.io/wai-tutorials/
> Feedback is welcome via email or in the meeting on Friday.
> Thanks,
> Eric
> --
> Eric Eggert, Web Accessibility Specialist
> WAI-ACT Project
> I’m yatil on IRC.

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