Re: Review Tutorials Cover Page

Hi Eric,

Looks great!

I had one minor thing that then ballooned into a couple of bigger things. Feel free to add these into the mix or ignore as appropriate :)


Some minor things:

First para:
"… and improves the user experience for all audiences."

to

"… and improve the user experience for all audiences."



Second para, I wonder if the following is slightly better (aka shorter… albeit not much! ;)):

They provide valuable resources for a variety of role, including:



‘All Tutorials’ seems a bit passive to me… not sure what I would use instead … just jars a little I guess.



"Images: In this tutorial, you can learn how to make images accessible, including decorative, linked, and grouped images.”

to

"Images:  Learn how to communicate images in an accessible way, including decorative, linked, and grouped images.”



“Additional tutorials… reviewed”

to

[header] Coming soon

We are working on tutorials for the following areas. They will be added once they have been completed and thoroughly reviewed.

• Forms: ….
• Sliders and carousels: ….
• Tell us what you would like to see


Thanks

Kevin


On 2 Jul 2014, at 09:18, Eric Eggert <ee@w3.org> wrote:

> Hi EO Working Group,
> 
> please take a look at the tutorial cover page that was just updated:
> http://w3c.github.io/wai-tutorials/
> 
> Feedback is welcome via email or in the meeting on Friday.
> 
> Thanks,
> Eric
> 
> 
> 
> --
> 
> Eric Eggert, Web Accessibility Specialist
> WAI-ACT Project
> 
> I’m yatil on IRC.
>