Re: Review Tutorials Cover Page

I'm so excited about the tutorials!  Can't wait for their release.

One minor suggestion:  strike "compelling" in "Web trainers will find
compelling examples" so it's "Web trainers will find examples...."  Using
the word compelling on one's own product sounds to my ears like marketing
braggadocio -- a red flag for me.  Who knows if people will find them
compelling.  And do they need to be?  Helpful and clear (which IMO they
are) seem much more important.

Anna Belle




On Wed, Jul 2, 2014 at 3:18 AM, Eric Eggert <ee@w3.org> wrote:

> Hi EO Working Group,
>
> please take a look at the tutorial cover page that was just updated:
> http://w3c.github.io/wai-tutorials/
>
> Feedback is welcome via email or in the meeting on Friday.
>
> Thanks,
> Eric
>
>
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> Eric Eggert, Web Accessibility Specialist
> WAI-ACT Project
>
> I’m yatil on IRC.
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