Fwd: Re: EOWG - Easy Checks updates & actions

Hello again,
I have found where to add the comments I have posted on my previous 
e-mail. they are in the wiki at:

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Sujet: Re: EOWG - Easy Checks updates & actions
Date : Tue, 12 Feb 2013 13:15:45 +0100
De : Sylvie Duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>
Répondre à : sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr
Organisation : Association BrailleNet
Pour : Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
Copie à : EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>

Hello Shawn and all,
I am looking at the draft page:
that you mentionned to be stable.
I have some minor comments, but I am not sure where to add these on the
wiki, for that reason, I send them in an e-mail.
1. Introduction, editor's discretion:section tools.
First sentence:
"Most of these checks you can do with any browser, that is, you do not
need to download anything."
Are the words in the right order in this sentence or should it be:
"You can do most of these checks with any browser, that is, you do not
need to download anything"?

2. Clarity of links:
It is not easy for the readers to read the links to the different tools
as http text. May be the name of the tool/browser would be more useful?
Example: Link text: "http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/new/". Or:

The link text questions seems to concern all the documents linked on
this page.

3. For page titles, the shortcut with the WAT toolbar is no direct one:
You first have to press ctrl+alt+6, then press down arrow key once or
type the first menu letter, maybe H for the English version?

4. In the headings section, heading: "To try checking headings in BAD"
There seems to be one or two words too much:
"Follow the one of the instructions under "To check headings outline" above"
Suggestion : "Follow one of the instructions under "To check headings
outline" above"

That's all for me regardding this page.

Le 09/02/2013 02:03, Shawn Henry a écrit :
> Here's an update on Easy Checks.
> "This section really boggles my mind." Sharron said. :-)
> To make it easier to review, I put the sections that are fairly stable
> in a WAI draft page: <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/eval/checks>
> If you have any comments on these sections, please put your comments in
> the wiki.
> While we're refining the other sections, we'll leave them in the wiki so
> anyone can edit them.
> Actions for all:
> * Review the Next Steps section and add your comments:
> <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Preliminary_Evaluation#Next_Steps>
> * Add your thoughts on title to
> <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Eval_Analysis#Brainstorms>
> Have a great weekend!
> ~Shawn

Sylvie Duchateau
Association BrailleNet
Tél.: +33 (0) 1 44 27 26 25 / Fax : +33 (0) 1 44 27 34 38
www.braillenet.org / www.accessiweb.org

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