RE: comments for discussion on "How People with Disabilities Use the Web"

I agree with Liam J

 

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Emmanuelle

 

De: w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org [mailto:w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org] En nombre
de Liam McGee
Enviado el: viernes, 29 de octubre de 2010 12:19
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Asunto: Re: comments for discussion on "How People with Disabilities Use the
Web"

 

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On 29/10/2010 08:53, Shadi Abou-Zahra wrote: 

Sailiesh Panchang 
- Throughout, "Related sections": keep nested lists or use sub-headings? 

Nested lists are appropriate here. +1 keep but editor's discretion.



- Stories, "Mr Lee": remove discussion of CMS as it is too technical? 

Maybe, but more important to have CMS discussed somewhere - it's not just
public facing websites!



- Stories, "Mr Lee": portrait effect of keyboard inaccessibility on RSI as
"re-damaging" vs "increasing pain"? 

re-damaging stood out as an odd usage - suggest 'causing significant pain'?



Jennifer Sutton 
- Overview, "catchy phrase": not a complete last sentence in the middle 

Not sure I understand -- do you mean "How do people who cannot move their
arms use your website? What about people who cannot see well or at all? Or
who have difficulty hearing or understanding, or who have other
accessibility needs?" -- if so you could replace the middle two question
marks with em-dashes to improve the grammar?



- Stories: use term "stories" consistently rather than mixing with
"scenarios" 

Agree, +1



Suzette Keith  - Throughout: add some references for teachers? Maybe just a
note on the overview page? 

Editor's discretion - nice point but don;t think it should hold up
publication



Sylvie Duchateau  - Throughout: remove "Page Contents" <h2> (?? requesting
confirmation) 

Hmmm. not sure. I found it quite useful as a navigation aid. Maybe run it as
a box float right as on other pages on WAI site?



Michael Stenitzer  - Throughout: make "How People with Disabilities Use the
Web" a superheadline (with smaller font) rather than sub-headline as now

Ooh, nice. Maybe one for other docs too in the great WAI site redesign?



- Throughout: drop information in brackets in "related sections" links 

Editor's discretion



- Overview, "catchy phrase": last sentence of the is not fluid 

Disagree, I think.



- Principles, "Accessibility Standards" section: add new sub-section
specifically about WAI standards (reusing the same content) 

Agree.

Regards all

Liam