- From: Sylvie Duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>
- Date: Thu, 02 Sep 2010 15:57:16 +0200
- To: "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Hello all, Here are some comments on the page: accessibility requirements at: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/2009/provisions 1. First a small typo that occurs several times on the page: neccessary instead of necessary. 2. On the page there is a phrase "main content" without any strucutre. Is it intended to remain visible or to have an h2? 3. In general, section titles: Related sections is not very clear. It does not show that the related sections are the other linked documents from the how PWD suite. Suggestions: either write a more explicit title. Or explain in the introduction that the page contains explanations about the WAI technical specifications, related sections in the suite with links to scenarios of Web users, accessibility barriers, and Web browsing methods. 4. In section "text alternatives", "related sections", "Web browsing methods", may be the use of text alternatives for speeh input software could be indicated. 5. In section "Users have enough time to read and use the content", part "related section/acccessibility barriers" I would add visual disability as it takes them also more time to interact with content. That is all for this page which sounds clear. Best Sylvie -- Sylvie Duchateau Association BrailleNet Tél.: +33(0] 1 44 27 26 25 Fax : +33 (0) 1 44 27 34 49 Web : http://www.accessiweb.org
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