Hi Sylvie, Thank you for your comments. Some initial responses below: On 02.09.2010 15:57, Sylvie Duchateau wrote: > Hello all, > Here are some comments on the page: accessibility requirements at: > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/2009/provisions > 1. First a small typo that occurs several times on the page: neccessary > instead of necessary. Fixed. > 2. On the page there is a phrase "main content" without any strucutre. > Is it intended to remain visible or to have an h2? Fixed. > 3. In general, section titles: > Related sections is not very clear. It does not show that the related > sections are the other linked documents from the how PWD suite. > Suggestions: either write a more explicit title. > Or explain in the introduction that the page contains explanations about > the WAI technical specifications, related sections in the suite with > links to scenarios of Web users, accessibility barriers, and Web > browsing methods. Yes, this is an issue. Let's discuss with the rest of the group during tomorrow's call. > 4. In section "text alternatives", "related sections", "Web browsing > methods", may be the use of text alternatives for speeh input software > could be indicated. Added to the provisional list as suggested (the list will be finalized when the web browsing methods page is completed). I've also taken a pass at mentioning it in the text above. > 5. In section "Users have enough time to read and use the content", part > "related section/acccessibility barriers" I would add visual disability > as it takes them also more time to interact with content. Let's discuss this one tomorrow too. I would argue that when websites are well designed, people with visual disabilities do not necessarily need more time to interact with them. Not sure though. > That is all for this page which sounds clear. Thank you. Best, Shadi > Best > Sylvie -- Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ | WAI International Program Office Activity Lead | W3C Evaluation & Repair Tools Working Group Chair |Received on Thursday, 2 September 2010 22:03:21 UTC
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