Re: What is the Web (For Review: Accessibility page for beta.w3.org)

Under "Why: the Case for..." I think that the phrase "It is essential 
that the web be accessible" rather glosses over what the Web is and how 
accessibility might happen. Many people will not understand what the Web 
is or what has to happen for it to be accessible. On the other hand it 
wouldn't be a good idea to get into detail so early on in the page. 
Perhaps it would suffice to explain that at this level the Web consists 
of "websites and web tools" as mentioned above, but explaining that 
these components together are what we mean as the Web.

Perhaps the words perceivable, operable, understandable and robust would 
help here.

"The flexibility of the web enables most people..." is not immediately 
evident to people, I think. Flexibility may be a new concept to many 
people. It might be clearer as "The web is a flexible medium and so 
enables most people..."

I think it is going to be difficult to convey this message in a short 
introduction, but it certainly seems to be getting there.

cheers,

Alan

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Alan Chuter
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Technosite - Grupo Fundosa
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Received on Tuesday, 25 August 2009 06:52:08 UTC