Re: All Titles Together (Experience Shared...)

Hi,

Trying to get the 'shared experiences' bit in, as well as specifying it 
the Web, and who the two groups are, how about returning to sort of 
where we started:

Shared Web Experiences: Mobile Device Users and People with Disabilities
or
Shared Experiences: Mobile Web Users and People with Disabilities

Or is it still too long?

Cheers, Andrew

Shadi Abou-Zahra wrote:
> 
> Hi Wayne, all,
> 
> Wayne Dick wrote:
>> I like the long titles for their descriptive value, but the length is 
>> a problem.  I tend to lose the middle of long words and sentences.  
>> So, I'm thinking we must cut the length even if descriptive precision 
>> is lost.
>> Maybe something new like:
>>
>> Mobile Device Use: A self imposed disability
> 
> There are several issues with this title in my opinion:
> 
> #1. it suggests that the document is about the use of mobile devices
> #2. it does not reflect the main aspect of shared user experiences
> #3. it implicitly equates using mobile devices to having a disability
> 
> I think the use of the colon is useful though, it provides a short name 
> and a slightly longer explanation (as Sylvie had also suggested).
> 
> Regards,
>   Shadi
> 

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Received on Thursday, 24 July 2008 09:04:39 UTC