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minor issue - RE: EOWG documents for review week of 26 July 2004

From: Shawn Lawton Henry <shawn@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 29 Jul 2004 17:12:50 -0500
To: "'EOWG (E-mail)'" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Message-ID: <000101c475b9$2fdbf3c0$d4837544@SLHenry>

Here is a minor issue for discussion (on the list and/or at the upcoming
teleconference):

- document: 6. Overview of the Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) Slide
Show
	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/wai-intro-slides

- The current wording:
"slide show" (throughout document)

- Concerns with the current wording:
might be confused with an automatically running slide presentation (per
Judy)

- Suggestions for revision:
just "slides, e.g.:
title becomes "Overview of the Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
Slides"
<h2> becomes "Links to Slides"
first sentence becomes "The Overview of the Web Accessibility Initiative
HTML slides provide an introduction to..."
etc.

- Reasons for the revision:
simple, not jargony, avoids possible confusion



> -----Original Message-----
> From: w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org 
> [mailto:w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Shawn Lawton Henry
> Sent: Tuesday, July 27, 2004 10:39 PM
> To: EOWG (E-mail)
> Subject: EOWG documents for review week of 26 July 2004
> 
> 
> 
> EOWG:
> 
> At the upcoming EOWG teleconference on Friday we will discuss 
> any issues with the documents linked below. Please review the 
> documents before the meeting and send any comments to the 
> EOWG list for discussion.
> 
> See also: 
> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/w3c-wai-eo/2004JulSep/0039
.html

Notes: 
- Feel free to send typos and other edits that do not need discussion to
wai-eo-editors@w3.org so as not to clutter up the EOWG issues
discussion.
- Reminder that we are focusing on content only for now - not layout and
design, which will be determined with site redesign.

1. [background] Requirements for Overview Pages [formerly referred to as
Intro pages] for WAI Site:
	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/UCD/intro-pages.html

2. Overview of WCAG:
	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/sketchpad/wcag-intro

3. WCAG 1.0 Document Links Example
	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/sketchpad/wcag-flow

4. Overview of UAAG:
	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/sketchpad/uaag

5. Overview of ATAG:
	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/sketchpad/atag

6. Overview of the Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) Slide Show
	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/wai-intro-slides

Regards,

~ Shawn

Shawn Lawton Henry
W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
e-mail: shawn@w3.org
phone: +1.617.253.8788
about: http://www.w3.org/People/Shawn/
Received on Thursday, 29 July 2004 18:29:05 UTC

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