- From: Helle Bjarnø <hbj@visinfo.dk>
- Date: Thu, 22 Jul 2004 15:45:37 +0200
- To: "EOWG (w3c-wai-eo@w3.org)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Hi All Finally I'm back after some very busy and interesting weeks, e.g. a presentation by Dominique Hazael-Massieux (W3C) of the w3c glossary and dictionary http://www.w3.org/2003/glossary/ <http://www.w3.org/2003/glossary/> which I'll come back to later. My comments/questions/thoughts for discussion: The heading of the first section is: What is Web Accessibility (a question) and I find it difficult to see or understand the first sentence as an answer to this question, I have problems with the concept. My suggestion is to change the sentence from: "Web accessibility focuses on developing the Web so that people with disabilities can use it effectively." To: "Web accessibility means that people with disability can use the web effectively". In order to make the list of impairments shorter could we say: communication, mobility, and cognitive impairments? I can't remember if we already have tried these terms and rejected them. I have a more general question: is it necessary to use the word Web so many times? Especially in the chapter: Making the Web Accessible. Throughout the document the terms "site" and "web site" seems to have been used a little inconsistently. Have we discussed to use lists (<li>) in stead of comma (,) in e.g. Making the Web Accessible Web accessibility is dependent on many factors, including Web site developers, Web browsers and media players, assistive technologies, authoring tools and evaluation tools, Web technologies, and users, as explained in "Components of Web Accessibility <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/UCD/components> ." The Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) <http://www.w3.org/WAI/about.html> develops guidelines for these components, that are international standards for Web accessibility. Could look like: Making the Web Accessible Web accessibility is dependent on many factors, including (what have we left out in this list?) Developers Browsers Media players Assistive technologies Authoring tools Evaluation tools Web technologies Users (end users or ?) More details and explanations can be found in "Components of Web Accessibility <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/UCD/components> ." The Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) <http://www.w3.org/WAI/about.html> develops guidelines for some of these components, that are international standards for Web accessibility. Finally: Throughout the document the terms "site" and "web site" seems to have been used a little inconsistently. And last but not least: Great work, I think you have done a super job on this! Cheers Helle Helle Bjarnø Visual Impairment Knowledge Centre Rymarksvej 1, 2900 Hellerup, Denmark Phone: +45 39 46 01 01 fax: +45 39 61 94 14 e-mail hbj@visinfo.dk <mailto:hbj@visinfo.dk> Direct phone: +45 39 46 01 04 www.visinfo.dk <www.visinfo.dk> www.euroaccessibility.org <www.euroaccessibility.org%20>
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