business case status as of 2 April 2004 & review notes

Notes for reviewing the business case resource suite and status as of 2
April 2004 follow.

STATUS
The status of all 5 pages is:
	- ready for final content review (questions below)
	- will do copyediting after content finalized
	- recent changelog items and comments sent by e-mail not yet
incorporated (per below)

Focus questions for content review:
	* does the format work?
	* are the topics covered appropriately in the appropriate
section?
	* is the content accurate? does it pass "reality check"?
	* is any statement likely to be misinterpreted negatively?
	* are there comments we might get from outside reviewers that we
want to address now?

1. www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/Overview.html Overview
2. www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/soc.html Social Factors
3. www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/tech.html Technical Factors
4. www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/fin.html Financial Factors
5. www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/pol.html Legal & Policy Factors

In order to facilitate reviewing, documents will remain stable through 7
April; that is, there will not be any changes posted until after
Wednesday. Status changes and additional review notes will be recorded
in the changelog at:
	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/changelog#review


PENDING EDITS
Pending edits are in the changelog and in the mail archives. Notable
pending edits include:

1. all pages: change title to Developing a Web Accessibility Business
Case for Your Organization:...

2. all sub-pages: Identifying [xyz] Factors for a Specific Organization
("questions") section: streamline so mostly just includes the
explanation of question, to provide conceptual support, but not get
bogged down

3. Social Factors: examine discussion of CSR so more on action, not on
appearance - and also not financial factors

Other pending edits in the changelog start at:
	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/changelog#changes
The eo-editors list is archived at:
	http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/wai-eo-editors/ 


COMMENTS AND LISTS
Please send comments by Wednesday 7 April 2004 to the appropriate list:
- send anything that needs EOWG discussion to:
	w3c-wai-eo@w3.org
- copyedits (such as typos) and things that do not need EOWG discussion
go to:
	wai-eo-editors@w3.org

(You do not need to copy shawn@w3.org on messages sent to either of
these lists, since the list setup has changed.)

Reminder: The first time you send a message to wai-eo-editors@w3.org you
might get a message from
"W3C List Manager [aa-sender@w3.org]" with the subject: "IMPORTANT: your
message to wai-eo-editors". You just need to follow the link in the
e-mail and approve that your message may be archived. (You can check the
list archives at http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/wai-eo-editors/ to
confirm that your message was indeed received, a few minutes after you
approve it.)

CONTACT
If you have any questions, feel free to contact me directly.

Regards,

~ Shawn


Shawn Lawton Henry
W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
e-mail: shawn@w3.org
phone: +1.617.253.8788
about: http://www.w3.org/People/Shawn/

Received on Friday, 2 April 2004 13:48:14 UTC