Re: BROCHURE DRAFT #2

My apologies for missing the meeting, but i have deadlines today.  here are
my comments on the brochure.

Who is the intended audience? The public or businesses or governments or all
the above.

>The Web is a vital resource for many of life's activities.

How about, "The Web is a vital resource for many of life's activities and
work."

>Many Web accessibility solutions emphasize redundant modalities,

Is modalities too big a word?  Outside of the WAI, how many lay people to
include developers would understand this word?

>* WAI INTEREST GROUP for general discussion forum on WAI work
>* three GUIDELINES WORKING GROUPS


Should we have a colon after GROUPS?


I like this, well thought through...rob

Received on Saturday, 27 February 1999 08:46:18 UTC