- From: Judy Brewer <jbrewer@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 04 Feb 1999 10:25:17 -0500
- To: Mike Paciello <paciello@ma.ultranet.com>, dd@w3.org
- Cc: w3c-wai-eo@w3.org
At 07:35 AM 2/4/99 -0500, Mike Paciello wrote: >Daniel: > >Before you call it "final" can I suggest that you have a copy editor look >review it for writing style? Yep we will. >The content looks fine, but I think there are a >couple editorial type issues. For example: > >1. Each term should be set off from the term's definition. Use a period or >colon. Hmmm. Colon, if we must. I'll check on this. >2. For Hypertext Links, reword second statement to: "For example, do not use >"click here". (not sure whether the period goes inside the quotes or >outside in >this situation. Check with an editor. Inside is generally more accepted; outside has become standard as well for some formats. I'll check as well. Judy ---------- Judy Brewer jbrewer@w3.org +1.617.258.9741 http://www.w3.org/WAI Director, Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) International Program Office World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) MIT/LCS Room NE43-355, 545 Technology Square, Cambridge, MA, 02139, USA
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