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Re: waicard10

From: Judy Brewer <jbrewer@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 04 Feb 1999 10:25:17 -0500
Message-Id: <3.0.5.32.19990204102517.00924100@localhost>
To: Mike Paciello <paciello@ma.ultranet.com>, dd@w3.org
Cc: w3c-wai-eo@w3.org
At 07:35 AM 2/4/99 -0500, Mike Paciello wrote:
>Daniel:
>
>Before you call it "final" can I suggest that you have a copy editor look
>review it for writing style? 

Yep we will.

>The content looks fine, but I think there are a
>couple editorial type issues. For example:
>
>1. Each term should be set off from the term's definition. Use a period or
>colon.

Hmmm. Colon, if we must. I'll check on this.

>2. For Hypertext Links, reword second statement to: "For example, do not use
>"click here". (not sure whether the period goes inside the quotes or
>outside in
>this situation. Check with an editor.

Inside is generally more accepted; outside has become standard as well for
some formats. I'll check as well.

Judy
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