Re: "ODRL Information Model 2.2" Japanese translation available

Wow - Thanks Shuji - wonderful work!

And yes, the typos you have found are errors (we will add to the errata for now).

 Naomi, how does this get added to the Translation link: https://www.w3.org/2003/03/Translations/byTechnology?technology=odrl-model <https://www.w3.org/2003/03/Translations/byTechnology?technology=odrl-model>

Cheers - Renato


> On 20 Feb 2018, at 20:50, Naomi Yoshizawa <naomi@w3.org> wrote:
> 
> Shuji++
> Shuji++
> Shuji++
> 
> Thank you always!
> 
> Naomi
> 
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> Naomi Yoshizawa, W3C, Keio University
> 5322 Endo, Fujisawa, Kanagawa 252-0882 Japan
> +813-3516-2504
> 
> On Tue, Feb 20, 2018 at 7:45 PM, 上綱秀治 <ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp <mailto:ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp>> wrote:
> Dear Sir and Madam
> 
> This is Shuji Kamitsuna@Japan.
> 
> "ODRL Information Model 2.2" in Japanese is available now.
> 
> http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/internet/rights/REC-odrl-model-20180215.html <http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/internet/rights/REC-odrl-model-20180215.html>
> 
> Thank you for the great specification!
> 
> I found some possible typos below.
> 
> Sec. 2.2.1, 2nd. Example Use Case:
>     "ttp://example.com/odrl:profile:03 <http://example.com/odrl:profile:03>" must be "http://example.com/odrl:profile:03 <http://example.com/odrl:profile:03>" - The initial "h" is missing.
> 
> Sec. 2.2.2, Example Use Case:
>     "can my indexed" might be "can be indexed".
> 
> Sec. 2.3.1, in the explanation of "assignee":
>     "the of Rule" might be "of the Rule".
> 
> Sec. 2.5.3:
>     "all of the the" must be "all of the" -  "the" is doubled.
> 
> Sec. 2.6.4, 2nd. Example Use Case:
>     "assigner MUST now also compensate" - Could "assigner" be "assinee"?
> 
> Best Regards,
> 
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> KAMITSUNA, Shuji.
> ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp <mailto:ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp>
> http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/ <http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/>
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Renato Iannella, Monegraph
Co-Chair, W3C Permissions & Obligations Expression (POE) Working Group