Re: "ODRL Information Model 2.2" Japanese translation available

Dear Renato,

> On 20 Feb 2018, at 12:39 , Renato Iannella <renato.iannella@monegraph.com> wrote:
> 
> Wow - Thanks Shuji - wonderful work!
> 
> And yes, the typos you have found are errors (we will add to the errata for now).
> 
>  Naomi, how does this get added to the Translation link: https://www.w3.org/2003/03/Translations/byTechnology?technology=odrl-model
> 

Unfortunately, it doesn’t.
We lost the ability to update the W3C Translations database a few years back after a linux update that rendered that database obsolete. We have yet to figure out (this is on our list) how to make translations available other than via the w3c-translators mail archive.

Kind regards,
Coralie

> Cheers - Renato
> 
> 
>> On 20 Feb 2018, at 20:50, Naomi Yoshizawa <naomi@w3.org> wrote:
>> 
>> Shuji++
>> Shuji++
>> Shuji++
>> 
>> Thank you always!
>> 
>> Naomi
>> 
>> --
>> Naomi Yoshizawa, W3C, Keio University
>> 5322 Endo, Fujisawa, Kanagawa 252-0882 Japan
>> +813-3516-2504
>> 
>> On Tue, Feb 20, 2018 at 7:45 PM, 上綱秀治 <ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp> wrote:
>> Dear Sir and Madam
>> 
>> This is Shuji Kamitsuna@Japan.
>> 
>> "ODRL Information Model 2.2" in Japanese is available now.
>> 
>> http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/internet/rights/REC-odrl-model-20180215.html
>> 
>> Thank you for the great specification!
>> 
>> I found some possible typos below.
>> 
>> Sec. 2.2.1, 2nd. Example Use Case:
>>     "ttp://example.com/odrl:profile:03" must be "http://example.com/odrl:profile:03" - The initial "h" is missing.
>> 
>> Sec. 2.2.2, Example Use Case:
>>     "can my indexed" might be "can be indexed".
>> 
>> Sec. 2.3.1, in the explanation of "assignee":
>>     "the of Rule" might be "of the Rule".
>> 
>> Sec. 2.5.3:
>>     "all of the the" must be "all of the" -  "the" is doubled.
>> 
>> Sec. 2.6.4, 2nd. Example Use Case:
>>     "assigner MUST now also compensate" - Could "assigner" be "assinee"?
>> 
>> Best Regards,
>> 
>> -- 
>> *******************
>> KAMITSUNA, Shuji.
>> ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp
>> http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
> 
> Renato Iannella, Monegraph
> Co-Chair, W3C Permissions & Obligations Expression (POE) Working Group
> 

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