Re[4]: Translation of article "CSS tutorial starting with HTML + CSS"

Hello Coralie.

Fixed, please check again
http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/html_css.html

Best Regards,
Igor Gladkiy

> Hi Igor

> One thing you didn't do exactly right. Please update the following:

> cf.  
> <http://validator.w3.org/checklink/checklink?uri=http%3A%2F%2Frozetka.com.ua%2Fnews-articles-promotions%2Farticles%2Fhtml_css.html&hide_type=all&depth=&check=Check>

> [[
>   Line: 33 http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/011/firstcss/ting.mp3
> Status: 404 Not Found

>   Line: 33 http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/011/firstcss/tingting.mp3
> Status: 404 Not Found
> ]]

> The correct URIs are:
> http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/011/ting.mp3
> http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/011/tingting.mp3

> Coralie

> On Fri, 04 Feb 2011 09:47:57 +0100, Ig0r <ig0r.gladkiy@gmail.com> wrote:

>> Hello Coralie.
>>
>> I fixed mistake, please check again.
>> http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/html_css.html
>>
>> Best Regards,
>> Igor Gladkiy
>>
>>
>>> On Fri, 28 Jan 2011 09:50:52 +0100, Ig0r <ig0r.gladkiy@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>>> Hi,
>>>> Here
>>>> (http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/html_css.html)
>>>> is my roumanian translation
>>>> of article "CSS tutorial starting with HTML + CSS"
>>>> (http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/011/firstcss.en.html)
>>>>
>>>> Your comments and advices are welcome.
>>>>
>>>> Best Regards,
>>>> Igor Gladkiy
>>
>>> Hello Igor
>>
>>> Thanks for this translation. A few comments before we can take it into
>>> account.
>>
>>> Could you update these parts in Cyrillic in the code:
>>
>>> [[
>>> <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xml:lang="ru-RU"
>> lang="ru-RU">><head><title>Начинаем работу с HTML + CSS</title>
>>> ]]
>>
>>> [[
>>>    <p><object type="text/html"
>>> data="http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/html_css.html/mypage00.htm"><p><a
>>> href="http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/011/mypage.html">[Законченная  
>>> HTML
>>> страница]</a></p></object>
>>> ]]
>>
>>> I also see this which you might want to update the mailto: part, lest
>>> Дмитрий Красников (Dmitry Krasnikov) is contacted in your stead:
>>
>>> [[
>>> Autorul traducerii: Igor Gladkiy <a
>>> href="mailto:dk-resume@yandex.ru">Ig0r.Gladkiy@gmail.com</a>
>>> ]]
>>
>>
>>> There is a broken link to fix:
>>> <http://validator.w3.org/checklink/checklink?uri=http%3A%2F%2Frozetka.com.ua%2Fnews-articles-promotions%2Farticles%2Fhtml_css.html&hide_type=all&depth=&check=Check>
>>
>>> [[
>>>   Line: 36
>>> http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/HTML%20+%20CSS_files/ting0000.mp3
>>> redirected to
>>> http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/HTML%20+%20CSS_files/ting0000.mp3/
>> Status: 301 ->> 404 Not Found
>>> ]]
>>
>>
>>> Looking at the original document, the line reads:
>>> [[  div.advanced {cue: url(ting.mp3) url(tingting.mp3)} ]]
>>> The location of that file in the original document is:
>>> <http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/011/tingting.mp3>
>>> I advise that either you link to this, or you copy the mp3 locally and
>>> point to this instead.
>>
>>
>>> Also, there is font display issue with your document. A colleague of  
>>> mine
>>> advised that you should remove the Gill Sans settings from the body tag  
>>> in:
>>> <http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/html_css.html/threepar.css>
>>
>>
>>> I ran the markup validator on your document and it reports 185 errors.
>>> <http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Frozetka.com.ua%2Fnews-articles-promotions%2Farticles%2Fhtml_css.html&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=Inline&group=0>
>>
>>> This is because you're using the wrong doctype. You declared XHTML 1.0
>>> Transitional but your markup looks like HTML4.
>>
>>> If I override the automatic detection and force HTML 4 transitional, the
>>> validator reports 2 errors:
>>> <http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Frozetka.com.ua%2Fnews-articles-promotions%2Farticles%2Fhtml_css.html&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=HTML+4.01+Transitional&group=0&user-agent=W3C_Validator%2F1.1>
>>
>>
>>> Coralie
>>
>>
>>
>>





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Received on Friday, 4 February 2011 17:38:50 UTC