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Re: ITALIAN Completed translation

From: Coralie Mercier <coralie@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 30 Jun 2010 15:27:20 +0200
To: "Chris Demarinis" <prorealestatesales@gmail.com>, "w3c-translators@w3.org" <w3c-translators@w3.org>
Message-ID: <op.ve37nulnsvvqwp@sith-wifi.sophia.w3.org>

Hello Chris and/or Sara Weber

I now see that the text for link and link are different, and that it's not  
the w3c blog entry you wanted to translate. Please, ignore the previous  
message I sent.

I have a few questions and comments.

Which document is the one to take into account between:
     http://www.grants-college.com/customdtd.htm
and http://www.portablegpsstore.net/dub.htm ?

Please change the disclaimer so that it doesn't state the translation is  
authorized ("autorizzata"). There is a disctinct process for Authorized  
translations. Remove the sentence "Ciò è una traduzione autorizzata di un  
documento di W3C. La pubblicazione di questa traduzione ha seguito i punti  
descritti nella politica per le traduzioni autorizzate W3C. Nel caso delle  
dispute, la versione autorevole della specifica è il documento originale e  
inglese." and change to one saying that the translation may contain errors  
and that the original English document on the W3C website is the one that  
is official.

Please also check the grammar in the text. For example "pagina valido" =>  
"pagina valida". Or if DTD is feminine, then update the adjective  
consistently.

Coralie


On Wed, 30 Jun 2010 08:54:17 +0200, Chris Demarinis  
<prorealestatesales@gmail.com> wrote:

> Dear Translators
>
> I have completed the translation into ITALIAN of the following  
> document(s):
>
> Don't use “custom
> DTDs”!http://www.w3.org/Style/customdtd<http://www.w3.org/QA/2010/06/w3c_cheatsheet_on_android_mark.html>
>
> to
>
> Non utilizzare "DTD personalizzata"!
> http://www.grants-college.com/customdtd.htm
>
> I confirm that, in compliance with the W3C Intellectual Property FAQ (
> http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/IPR-FAQ-20000620#translate), I have
> placed a prominent disclaimer in my translation(s) in which I disclose,  
> (1)
> the title of and link to the original English document, (2) that my  
> document
> is a translation which may contain errors, and (3) that the original  
> English
> document on the W3C website is the one that is official. (Items (2) and  
> (3)
> are in the target language.)
>
> I confirm that the links within my translation(s) are valid and I have
> endeavoured to provide valid markup and CSS (validation tools are at
> http://validator.w3.org/).
>
> THank You Very Much and I look forward to providing more translations for
> W3.org in the future


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