- From: Sergey Melnik <melnik@DB.Stanford.EDU>
- Date: Tue, 29 Oct 2002 07:28:47 -0800 (PST)
- To: Brian McBride <bwm@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
- cc: RDF Core <w3c-rdfcore-wg@w3.org>
I could subscribe under most of Brian's comments. In particular, I agree that the document can be shortened substantially. It's supposed to be a spec... I would suggest to keep Sec. 2 short and get to the 'meat' of the document, the abstract data model, as soon as possible. Sec. 4 definitely needs to be rearranged, e.g., in the way Brian suggested (top-down). The graph model could be defined more concisely and a bit more formally. I'd also move all business of XML syntax after the graph model has been presented, or maybe into the syntax doc altogether. Sec. 2.2, and 2.3 could possibly be reduced to one page each. Sec. 2.1 and 2.4 could be replaced by an introductory paragraph in Sec. 1 and 4, respectively. Sergey On Tue, 29 Oct 2002, Brian McBride wrote: > I've done a pass through the whole document. There is now some purple text > to indicate technical issues, though not a lot and quite a lot more green text. > > Brian
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