- From: Jeremy Carroll <jjc@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
- Date: Tue, 29 Oct 2002 13:22:32 +0100
- To: "Dave Beckett" <dave.beckett@bristol.ac.uk>, "Jeremy Carroll" <jjc@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
- Cc: <w3c-rdfcore-wg@w3.org>
> -----Original Message----- > From: Dave Beckett [mailto:dave.beckett@bristol.ac.uk] > Subject: Re: Regrets - 1st Nov > > Are you going to have any comments on the syntax WD? > > If so, I'd prefer to have anything you've got ASAP so I can edit > anything in before Friday. > So far I have read up to but excluding the grammar (section 7 is it now). I have a few minor fixes and one substantive change:- Section 2 must have one of the following changes: - clearly marked as informative - moved to being an informative appendix - deleted (if we were to follow the puritanical minimalist model - which would be my pref. but I would freely admit that the other docs including RDF-C&ADM don't follow this) The minor fixes I have are corrections to section 2 which is occasionally incorrect. We are unlikely to have found all the bugs, which is why the change to explicit informative status is imperative. As a taster: [[ 2.8 "beginning a:Collection" The example should be change to delete the whitespace between the end of the ex:prop start tag and the beginning of the a:Collection start tag, so that the comment cannot be misinterpreted as indicating that the whitespace is insignificant. ]] I think my other corrections are at a similar level of pedantry. An editorial issue in section 2 is the use of the word value for the object of a triple. I think this is probably misguided and confusing. I suggest that we should not use 'value' for anything syntactic - often I believe the phrases would be better with the word "object". I hope to send my full comments first thing tomorrow morning. Jeremy
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