- From: Graham Klyne <Graham.Klyne@MIMEsweeper.com>
- Date: Mon, 04 Nov 2002 13:54:03 +0000
- To: Dan Connolly <connolly@w3.org>
- Cc: w3c-rdfcore-wg@w3.org
Dan, Many thanks for this... I think these are all useful comments. I'm responding here only to those where I seek further clarification or maybe compromise. At 11:49 PM 10/31/02 -0600, Dan Connolly wrote: >"well founded deductions in RDF data" > >is 'well founded' used here as a particular term of art? >I don't see what it adds. I wanted to convey the sense of something more definite that the colloquial English (as opposed to mathematical) meaning of "inference". Suggest s/well founded/provable/ ? >... > >"2.2.1 A simple data model > >RDF has a simple data model that is easy for applications to process and >manipulate." > >Hm... if it's that simple, can't we say *a little bit* >about what it is in this section? Maybe... This is a section on goals, not concepts. But I do like some of your ideas. ><diversion> > >I wonder if "relational" is better than "graph" when >talking about the abstract syntax or datamodel or >whatever it is. > >Thinking about RDF as the simplest SQL table that can >subsume all other SQL tables might be a useful >rhetorical device. > ></diversion> I think that might be one for the Primer, if we use it at all? >... > >"a sound basis for reasoning" > >er... "sound" is a term of art, like "model theory". >strike it? My suggestion: s/sound/dependable/, which I think also goes a small way to addressing your point about motivation. I'm reluctant to add further motivating text at this time, not because I disagree with the points you made, but because I'm concerned it would beg more questions. >... </CRITICAL> <WRONG> > >"But what consitutes a "simple fact"? Roughly, the kind of >information that can be stored in a relational database" > >suggest: > can be stored in +one cell of+ a relational database > >... </WRONG> Er, I'm not convinced by "one cell of". I do buy "one row of". ... I think I got the rest. Some of your comments were against text that was removed in response to Brian's comments. #g ------------------- Graham Klyne <GK@NineByNine.org>
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