- From: Brian McBride <bwm@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
- Date: Mon, 03 Sep 2001 18:47:41 +0100
- To: rdf core <w3c-rdfcore-wg@w3.org>
nitpickings (cringingly):
o table of contents numbering does not match section numbering
o section 1, para 2
I was a little confused about what two sets were being discussed.
Move to later in the section?
o section 1, para 1
The forward reference to RDFS and the 'trust me' the sets are well
founded is a bit defensive. Delete it, or move it later?
o section 1, para 13
typo - missing bracket
I(E) = true iff <I(s), I(o)> ...
^
o section 1, later
a b c, c a a etc should be <a b c>, <c a a> for consistency
o section 1, 2nd last para
typo - missing space
I(<a bc>
^
o section 2, para before 2a
typo "qua nodes"?
o section 2a, para 3
Each arc (triple) labeled with <s p o>
Arc's are labeled with p, not <s p o>, possibly:
Each arc from node s to node o with label p ...
o section 5, para 2
"germane to questions of bag identity"
I'm confused by the bag identity stuff. A bag is a resource which is
identified by a URI, not by its contents. Maybe equals, equivalence?
Or am I missing the point here?
o section 5, para 3
"containers are a series on IR"
a series on IR union LV?
Brian
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Received on Monday, 3 September 2001 13:51:17 UTC