- From: Jeni Tennison <jeni@jenitennison.com>
- Date: Sun, 22 Jul 2007 21:32:25 +0100
- To: public-xml-processing-model-wg@w3.org
Just a few editorial things. The first couple of paragraphs make it sound as if pipelines and steps can only have one input and one output, when in fact they can have several. In Example 1, "Result Document" is given as if it was the name of an output, but it isn't a legal output name because it has a space in it. Probably best to use a different term (eg just "result") just in case it gets people confused. In fact, it would be nice if the figure and the example code were consistent with each other in the names of the inputs and outputs (ie name the inputs 'source' and 'schemaDoc' in the figure). It might be useful to provide a full syntax version of one or both of the example pipelines in this section. They both currently use fairly heavy defaulting, which is fine if you want to indicate the simplicity of XProc but not so good for people just starting to understand it. Jeni -- Jeni Tennison http://www.jenitennison.com
Received on Sunday, 22 July 2007 20:35:45 UTC