- From: Jodi Schneider <jodi.schneider@deri.org>
- Date: Thu, 15 Sep 2011 17:15:21 +0100
- To: Karen Coyle <kcoyle@kcoyle.net>
- Cc: public-xg-lld@w3.org
Thanks, Karen. I've implemented the changes you suggested. Questions inline for everybody below. On 15 Sep 2011, at 16:30, Karen Coyle wrote: >> >> * Have we decided to use "cases" as opposed to "use cases"? > > I could use a style guide on that! Anyone? >> REPHRASING WOULD BE USEFUL >> * "Beyond this analysis based on the Incubator Group cases, Library Linked Data community members should consider contributing to measuring the usage of element sets against more precise and up-to-date listings of datasets and value vocabularies" > > #1 - avoid the "-ing" form in English where possible. I don't know why, but it makes things (:-) not really an ING!) hard to read. > > However, I have no idea what is being measured here. Are we asking the LLD community to keep a list of datasets and value vocabs? To what purpose? I have tried: Beyond this analysis based on the Incubator Group cases, Library Linked Data community members should consider helping maintain precise and up-to-date listings of datasets and value vocabularies, such as the [http://ckan.net/group/lld CKAN Library Linked Data group], so that the usage of element sets can be measured. Antoine, William, Jeff, Marcia: is this what you intended? Or could you please provide more guidance? > >> >> * "It is also apparent that linking to other data that do not have this central character is quite common." > > ??? no idea what is meant It's something about "you don't have to be popular to be useful" -- but I think this sentence could be improved. Anybody care to give it a stab? >> QUESTIONS ABOUT WORDING >> * I'm not sure what this means: >> "When publishing a new package, adding it to CKAN means that it is included in a frequently consulted list of packages. " > > I think it is merely that adding your package to CKAN gives it visibility through the CKAN service, which people consult to find datasets to use. Ok, I've tried: Adding a new package to CKAN aids its visibility: this is a frequently consulted list of packages. > > --- done up to here > kc Ok, anybody have time to take a look at the bottom here? > >> >> * I'm not sure what this means: >> "Although ULAN not yet published as Linked Data per se, it does appears in the [http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/Vocabulary_and_Dataset#VIAF_.28Virtual_International_Authority_File.29|VIAF]." >> >> * What does "their own" refer to here? >> "In addition to the documentation made available on their own websites, the reader can view their content using generic ontology creation and visualization tools such as [http://protege.stanford.edu/ Protégé], the [http://owl.cs.manchester.ac.uk/browser/ Manchester ontology browser], [http://pellet.owldl.com/owlsight/ OWL Sight] or the [http://lode.sourceforge.net/ Live OWL Documentation Environment (LODE)] " >> >> ACRONYMS >> * Does NACO stand for "name authority component"? Should we spell that out? >> * Does TELplus stand for The European Library plus? Should we spell that out? >> * What is the correct name for MARC21? MAchine-Readable Cataloging21? >> * When should DC be abbreviated? >> * Should API be spelled out? >> * Does SKOS-XL have a long name? >> * Ditto for OWL-DL? >> * Does LOCAH have a long name? >> * Does SPECTRUM have a long name? >> >> STRUCTURAL STUFF >> * "As of the winter of 2011," "It contains terms in 24 languages (as of May 2011)." >> Do we want to say "As of the date of this report"? >> >> * It's a little strange that the usage examples appear before the vocabs here: >> >> =====Preservation vocabularies from LoC===== >> >> * Usage examples: [[Use Case Digital Preservation]] >> >> ======[http://id.loc.gov/vocabulary/preservationEvents Preservation Events]====== >> >> A concept scheme for the preservation events, i.e., actions performed on digital objects within a preservation repository. >> >> ======[http://id.loc.gov/vocabulary/preservationLevelRole Preservation Level Role]====== >> >> A concept scheme for the preservation level roles, i.e., values that specify in what context a set of preservation options is applicable. >> >> Thanks! -Jodi
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