- From: Jodi Schneider <jodi.schneider@deri.org>
- Date: Fri, 9 Sep 2011 20:11:51 +0100
- To: Peter Murray <peter.murray@lyrasis.org>, Karen Coyle <kcoyle@kcoyle.net>
- Cc: public-xg-lld <public-xg-lld@w3.org>
Karen didn't think this looked ambiguous, so I'm leaving this alone for the moment, unless we get other feedback. -Jodi On 9 Sep 2011, at 19:32, Peter Murray wrote: > The "particular uniquely-identified resource" selection makes the most sense to me. > > > Peter > > On Sep 9, 2011, at 2:07 PM, Jodi Schneider wrote: >> >> I think the phrase "particular uniquely identified resource" might need a comma or hyphen, in order to ensure it's correctly parsed. Thoughts? >> >> In a graph-based architecture, in contrast, an organization can supply individual statements about a resource, and all statements provided about a particular uniquely identified resource can be aggregated into a global graph. >> >> Some possibilities: >> "particular, uniquely identified resource" >> "particular uniquely-identified resource" >> "particular, uniquely-identified resource" >> >> I'm not sure if any of these are clear/prevent misreading. Hopefully somebody else has a sense of that (or will just tell me to be less picky!) >> >> -Jodi > > > -- > Peter Murray Peter.Murray@lyrasis.org tel:+1-678-235-2955 > Ass't Director, Technology Services Development http://dltj.org/about/ > LYRASIS -- Great Libraries. Strong Communities. Innovative Answers. > The Disruptive Library Technology Jester http://dltj.org/ > Attrib-Noncomm-Share http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/2.5/ >
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