- From: Luis Barriga <luis.barriga@ericsson.com>
- Date: Tue, 13 May 2008 14:06:46 +0200
- To: <public-wsc-wg@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <1C6A13C92F510849B72272A71F9F3BCB0381E59D@esealmw105.eemea.ericsson.se>
[para = paragraph] * There are two Ack sections: section 2 & section 10 Also, the list of acknowledged folks is not the same. * Section 4.2.1 2nd para: twice the word "... are are available ..." * Section 5.1.1 4th para: two typos "certiicates" & "certifiate" 5th para: typo "whlie" * Section 5.1.2 2nd para: typo "implementers" >> "implementors" 6th para+onwards: AAC abbreviation used only once ..."augmented assurance cert">> "AAC" everywhere? 8th para onwards: "user agent" >> "Web user agents" * Section 5.1.5 1st para: SSC abbreviation introduced but never used "self-signed cert" >> "SSC" everywhere? 1st para: "trust root" >> "trust anchor" 2nd para onwards: "untrusted root" >> "untrusted anchor"? 2nd para last line": "different certificate" "different SSC" Last para: "If a client..." >> "If a Web user agent..." Last line: "client also have..." >> "user agent also has..." * Section 5.1.6 3rd para:"Presentation of a petname MUST support renaming..">> ..."Management of a petname MUST support presentation, renaming.." 5th para onwards: "web user agent" >> "Web user agent" 5th para last line:"bookmark presentation">>"bookmark management" * Section 5.5.1 3rd para: "trusted root certificate">>"trusted anchor" 6th para: "secondary chrome">>"secondary user interface" 7-8th paras: twice "HTTP connection" >> "HTTP transaction" * Section 5.5.2 1st para onwards: "User agents" >> "Web user agents" * Section 6.1.2 Para after bulleted list: "augmented assurance certificate" ... is underlined here whereas sometimes is not * Section 6.2 2nd para onwards: "primary and secondary chrome" >> .... "primary and secondary user interface" Last para: both "Cookies" and "cookies" capitals? * Section 6.4.1 1st & 2nd paras: "primary chrome" >> "primary user interface" 3rd para: "advanced user" has not been defined before ... how can that be normative? * Section 6.4.2 1st para: "the browser cannot.." >> "the Web user agent cannot.." 2nd para: "primary chrome" >> "primary user interface" * Section 7.1 1st para: "security critical information" >> ...>> "security context information" * Section 7.1.1 1st para: typo "Emporer's" >> "Emperor's" * Section 7.2 Last para: " Web User Agents" >> "Web user agents" * Section 9.1 1st&2nd paras: "extended validation certs" >> "AACs"? 2nd para: "authenticated DNS records" .... is a reference to DNSSEC [RFC3008] missing? * Section 11 Following references are not referred in the document ECRYPT2006, NESSIE, RFC2616 (HTTP), RFC4254 (SSH), RSA-SIZES, WHALENVIDENCE, XIA
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