- From: Luis Barriga <luis.barriga@ericsson.com>
- Date: Tue, 13 May 2008 14:06:46 +0200
- To: <public-wsc-wg@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <1C6A13C92F510849B72272A71F9F3BCB0381E59D@esealmw105.eemea.ericsson.se>
[para = paragraph]
* There are two Ack sections: section 2 & section 10
Also, the list of acknowledged folks is not the same.
* Section 4.2.1
2nd para: twice the word "... are are available ..."
* Section 5.1.1
4th para: two typos "certiicates" & "certifiate"
5th para: typo "whlie"
* Section 5.1.2
2nd para: typo "implementers" >> "implementors"
6th para+onwards: AAC abbreviation used only once
..."augmented assurance cert">> "AAC" everywhere?
8th para onwards: "user agent" >> "Web user agents"
* Section 5.1.5
1st para: SSC abbreviation introduced but never used
"self-signed cert" >> "SSC" everywhere?
1st para: "trust root" >> "trust anchor"
2nd para onwards: "untrusted root" >> "untrusted anchor"?
2nd para last line": "different certificate" "different SSC"
Last para: "If a client..." >> "If a Web user agent..."
Last line: "client also have..." >> "user agent also has..."
* Section 5.1.6
3rd para:"Presentation of a petname MUST support renaming..">>
..."Management of a petname MUST support presentation, renaming.."
5th para onwards: "web user agent" >> "Web user agent"
5th para last line:"bookmark presentation">>"bookmark management"
* Section 5.5.1
3rd para: "trusted root certificate">>"trusted anchor"
6th para: "secondary chrome">>"secondary user interface"
7-8th paras: twice "HTTP connection" >> "HTTP transaction"
* Section 5.5.2
1st para onwards: "User agents" >> "Web user agents"
* Section 6.1.2
Para after bulleted list: "augmented assurance certificate"
... is underlined here whereas sometimes is not
* Section 6.2
2nd para onwards: "primary and secondary chrome" >>
.... "primary and secondary user interface"
Last para: both "Cookies" and "cookies" capitals?
* Section 6.4.1
1st & 2nd paras: "primary chrome" >> "primary user interface"
3rd para: "advanced user" has not been defined before
... how can that be normative?
* Section 6.4.2
1st para: "the browser cannot.." >> "the Web user agent cannot.."
2nd para: "primary chrome" >> "primary user interface"
* Section 7.1
1st para: "security critical information" >>
...>> "security context information"
* Section 7.1.1
1st para: typo "Emporer's" >> "Emperor's"
* Section 7.2
Last para: " Web User Agents" >> "Web user agents"
* Section 9.1
1st&2nd paras: "extended validation certs" >> "AACs"?
2nd para: "authenticated DNS records"
.... is a reference to DNSSEC [RFC3008] missing?
* Section 11
Following references are not referred in the document
ECRYPT2006, NESSIE, RFC2616 (HTTP), RFC4254 (SSH),
RSA-SIZES, WHALENVIDENCE, XIA
Received on Tuesday, 13 May 2008 15:14:27 UTC