Re: Updated Policy Drafts

Note, added 3980 to description of changes for Guidelines, I appear  
to have missed that one in the summary (but it is included in the  
diff and document).

see below.

regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia


On Jan 9, 2007, at 5:01 PM, Frederick Hirsch wrote:

> The editors have produced new versions of the Framework,  
> Attachment, Primer and Guidelines documents, including red-lined  
> versions showing changes from the Published W3C Working Drafts [1].
>
> All documents include updates to version changes section. In  
> addition, each incorporates the changes listed below.
>
> 1. Framework and Framework diff
>
> Implemented Editors' Action 93 for Mac MIME type, make Mac File  
> Type code be TEXT.
> Resolution for issue 4039 - WS-Policy does not define its  
> relationship to XML Base.
> Resolution for issue 4038 - Nested policy not in normal form in  
> section 4.3.2.
> Include Umit and Frederick in Editors list.
>
> 2. Attachment and Attachment diff
>
> Resolution for issue 4039 - WS-Policy does not define its  
> relationship to XML Base.
> Applied the missed amendment (re issue 4039) to section 3.5 Use of  
> IRIs in Policy Attachment.
> Include Umit and Frederick in Editors list.
>
> 3. Primer and Primer diff
>
> Resolution for issue 3965 - Clarify text surrounding  
> PolicyReference and for usage of wsp:Name attribute
> Resolution for issue 4069 - Updating References for Use of xml:id
>
> 4. Guidelines and Guidelines diff
>
> Editorial cleanup based on editorial comments on policy mail list.
> Resolution for issue 3792 - Overlap of primer and guidelines -  
> Replaced section in Lifecycle with pointer to the text in the primer
> Formatted examples in 5.2 Evolution of Assertions (Versioning and  
> Compatibility)
> Formatted examples in 4.2 Authoring Styles and 8. Scenario and a  
> worked example.

Resolution for 3980 - The introduction section should state that the  
Guidelines document
assumes a basic understanding of the Web Services Policy language.

> Resolution for Issue 3982  The introduction should state that the  
> document only targets policy assertion authors
> Resolution for issue 3983 The Guidelines document should use a  
> phrase to identify the target audience consistently.
>
> [1] <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/>
>
> regards, Frederick
>
> Frederick Hirsch
> Nokia
>
>

Received on Wednesday, 10 January 2007 02:15:25 UTC