NEW ISSUE: Editorial corrections and clarifications from UDDI TC (Bugzilla ID 3709)

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3709
 
Title: Editorial corrections and clarifications from UDDI TC
 
Description:
This applies to the Attachment[1] document, and were pointed out by Luc Clement, co-chair of the OASIS UDDI TC. This proposal is for the editorial team to make these modifications.
 
Section 5.2
"UDDI registries MUST use the tModelKey
uuid:a27078e4-fd38-320a-806f-6749e84f8005 to uniquely identify this tModel"
Change to:
"UDDI registries MUST use the (UDDI v2) tModelKey
uuid:a27078e4-fd38-320a-806f-6749e84f8005 to uniquely identify this tModel"
Inser the  "UDDI v2" reference here so readers know that they are looking at a
v2 formatted key; the key format changes in v3.

Section 5.4
"Third, inquiries for reusable policy expression tModels and UDDI entities that
are associated with remote policy expression is enhanced by the wildcard
mechanism"
change to:
"Third, inquiries for reusable policy expression tModels described in section
5.3 Registering Reusable Policy Expressions and UDDI tModel entities that are
associated with remote policy expression is enhanced by the wildcard mechanism"
Add reference to 5.3 otherwise it's easy to confuse which of the two types if
being referred to
Add "tModel" otherwise the sentence makes no sense.
Section B3.2
In the table entry for "UDDI Key (V3)" Change :
        uddi:schemas.xmlsoap.org:remotepolicyreference:2003_03
change "remotepolicyreference" to "localpolicyreference"
Section B3.3
After:
<keyedReference
       keyName="uddi-org:types:categorization"
       keyValue="categorization"
       tModelKey="uuid:c1acf26d-9672-4404-9d70-39b756e62aB4" />
Add the following for the missing categorization:
    <keyedReference tModelKey="uuid:c1acf26d-9672-4404-9d70-39b756e62aB4"
keyName="uddi-org:types:checked" keyValue="checked"/>
 
References:
[1] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment.html
 
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