Re: http://www.w3.org/2006/07/13-ws-policy-minutes.html#action05

Asir

+ 1.

You could add "of entities in a Web services-based system." to the  
end of the first sentence, to correspond to the list discussion  
regarding the Framework system.

This tighter version is an improvement.

Thanks

regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia


On Jul 20, 2006, at 1:36 AM, ext Asir Vedamuthu wrote:

> Hi Ashok,
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> Thank you for starting this thread. (Apologize, if the colors don’t  
> survive the mail server.)
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> I marked up few bits that are redundant (Yellow) and few bits that  
> don’t add any additional info (Grey) to Introduction. I suggested  
> few minor changes (Green). And the net is,
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> “The Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework [Web Services Policy  
> Framework] specification defines an abstract model and an XML-based  
> language for expressing policies. This specification, Web Services  
> Policy 1.5 - Attachment, defines two general-purpose mechanisms for  
> associating policies with the subjects to which they apply; the  
> policies may be defined as part of existing metadata about the  
> subject or the policies may be defined independently and associated  
> through an external binding to the subject.
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>
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> To enable Web Services Policy to be used with existing Web service  
> technologies, this specification describes the use of these general  
> purpose mechanisms with WSDL [WSDL 1.1, WSDL 2.0 Core Language]  
> definitions and UDDI [UDDI API 2.0, UDDI Data Structure 2.0, UDDI  
> 3.0].”
>
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> Regards,
>
> Asir S Vedamuthu
>
> Microsoft Corporation
>
>
> From: public-ws-policy-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-policy- 
> request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Ashok Malhotra
> Sent: Monday, July 17, 2006 10:56 AM
> To: public-ws-policy@w3.org
> Subject: RE: http://www.w3.org/2006/07/13-ws-policy- 
> minutes.html#action05
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> Suggested rewording of Introduction section of Policy Attachment  
> document is as below:
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> 1. Introduction
> The Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework [Web Services Policy  
> Framework] specification defines an abstract model and an XML-based  
> language for expressing policies. This specification, Web Services  
> Policy 1.5 - Attachment, defines two general-purpose mechanisms for  
> associating policies with the subjects to which they apply; the  
> policies may be defined as part of existing metadata about the  
> subject or the policies may be defined independently and associated  
> through an external binding to the subject.
>
> To enable Web Services Policy to be used with existing Web service  
> technologies, this specification also describes the use of these  
> general purpose mechanisms for attaching policies to with WSDL  
> [WSDL 1.1, WSDL 2.0 Core Language] definitions and UDDI [UDDI API  
> 2.0,UDDI Data Structure 2.0, UDDI 3.0].
>
> Specifically, this specification defines the following:
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> ·         Two general-purpose mechanisms for associating policies  
> with policy subjects: either directly as an attribute on the  
> subject definition or indirectly using an attachment mechanism.
>
> ·         How to associate policies with WSDL definitions.
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> ·         How to associate policies with UDDI entities.
>
> Note also that WS-Addressing [http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-ws-addr- 
> core-20060509/] also provides a mechanism for including metadata  
> information, including policy, as part of an Endpoint Reference.   
> This mechanism will not be discussed further in this specification.
>
> All the best, Ashok
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