Title -- Modify restrictive wording about application of policies to a Web Service in the Framework abstract. Description -- In the abstract section, the wording of the sentence "The Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework provides a general purpose model and corresponding syntax to describe the policies of a Web Service." [my bold/italics] ignores the fact that policies apply just as well to a requetor as to an endpoint ("a Web Service"). Target -- Abstract section in WS-Policy Framework 1.5 document. Proposal -- I actually noticed a very well-worded alternative in the Introduction section (Section 1): "Web Services Policy provides a flexible and extensible grammar for expressing the capabilities, requirements, and general characteristics of entities in an XML Web services-based system. Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework defines a framework and a model for the expression of these properties as policies." (my bold/italics). I propose we use similar wording in the abstract. The new sentence would read: "The Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework provides a general purpose model and corresponding syntax to describe the policies in a Web services-based system." (again, my bold/italics). Toufic Boubez, Ph.D. Chief Technology Officer LAYER 7 TECHNOLOGIES / Advancing the application network. 604.681.9377 x310 (w) 604.288.7970 (m) tboubez@layer7tech.com <mailto:tboubez@layer7tech.com> (e) www.layer7tech.com <http://www.layer7tech.com/> (w)Received on Thursday, 13 July 2006 15:31:13 UTC
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