RE: WS-Policy 1.5 Specs Editors Drafts for Sanity Check Review

Hi Maryann,

 

I agree with your comments. Can I request you to make the changes?

 

Thanks,

 

Prasad 

 

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From: Maryann Hondo [mailto:mhondo@us.ibm.com] 
Sent: Friday, October 13, 2006 6:21 AM
To: Prasad Yendluri
Cc: public-ws-policy-eds@w3.org; public-ws-policy-eds-request@w3.org
Subject: Re: WS-Policy 1.5 Specs Editors Drafts for Sanity Check Review

 


Prasad, 
Thanks for all your hard work on this. 
I've given both a quick pass and will print out and review over the weekend
with a more detailed reading, 
but here are two minor changes to the summary text to consider.... 
I think the phrased is "fleshed-out" but I would recommend replacing this
with "added text to". 
And for the security considerations section, why not just leave out the
material in "()"...I don't think it adds anything. 

I think simple, direct statements are the way to go for a summary. 

Maryann 




Prasad Yendluri <prasad.yendluri@webmethods.com> 
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10/12/2006 04:29 PM 


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WS-Policy 1.5 Specs Editors Drafts for Sanity Check Review

 


 

 




Folks, 
  
We have all the work on the Attachment specification completed. 
  
Dave: I did the Appendix D (Changes since last WD) also, so that we can
start internal review of this document, 
while we await the last AI on the framework doc to be completed. 
  
1. The Editors Draft of the Attachment document is here:
<http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment.htm
l>
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment.html

2. The Corresponding diffs from last WD file is here:
<http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment-dif
f20060927.html>
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment-diff
20060927.html 
  
If you like, please also review the mostly complete Framework document (we
have just one AI pending), so that we can get head start on this document
also: 
  
3. The Editors Draft of the Framework document is here:
<http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework.html
>
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework.html 
4. The Corresponding diffs from last WD is here:
<http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework-diff
20060927.html>
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework-diff2
0060927.html 
  
Please review for sanity check to see if we are ready to send this out to
the WG. Just sanity check to spot obvious blunders: 
As an editor please feel free to make any updates you see needed (and let
the team know). 
  
If there are no major issues, I hope we can send these to the WG COB Monday?

  
Thanks. 
  
Prasad