Re: WS-Policy 1.5 Specs Editors Drafts for Sanity Check Review

Prasad,
Thanks for all your hard work on this.
I've given both a quick pass and will print out and review over the 
weekend with a more detailed reading,
but here are two minor changes to the summary text to consider....
I think the phrased is "fleshed-out" but I would recommend replacing this 
with "added text to".
And for the security considerations section, why not just leave out the 
material in "()"...I don't think it adds anything.

I think simple, direct statements are the way to go for a summary.

Maryann



Prasad Yendluri <prasad.yendluri@webmethods.com> 
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10/12/2006 04:29 PM

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WS-Policy 1.5 Specs Editors Drafts for Sanity Check Review






Folks,
 
We have all the work on the Attachment specification completed. 
 
Dave: I did the Appendix D (Changes since last WD) also, so that we can 
start internal review of this document, 
while we await the last AI on the framework doc to be completed.
 
1. The Editors Draft of the Attachment document is here: 
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment.html
2. The Corresponding diffs from last WD file is here: 
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment-diff20060927.html
 
If you like, please also review the mostly complete Framework document (we 
have just one AI pending), so that we can get head start on this document 
also:
 
3. The Editors Draft of the Framework document is here: 
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework.html
4. The Corresponding diffs from last WD is here: 
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework-diff20060927.html
 
Please review for sanity check to see if we are ready to send this out to 
the WG. Just sanity check to spot obvious blunders:
As an editor please feel free to make any updates you see needed (and let 
the team know).
 
If there are no major issues, I hope we can send these to the WG COB 
Monday?
 
Thanks.
 
Prasad